Sherloc: Reboot, by Nathan Boeker

109 pages

Published on November 7, 2017 by Boekerbooks

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John is an ordinary student at an extraordinary school. When his phone is taken over by an artificial intelligence program, John becomes an unwitting accomplice in a broadening web of intrigue. Get drawn into a high-tech world of adventure and suspense.

I’m always down for a Sherlock Holmes remix, and teaming up a teenaged Watson with an AI version of everyone’s favorite detective is a concept I haven’t seen before. However, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle left some big shoes to fill, and the storytelling in Sherloc: Reboot just doesn’t compare.

The writing is rather threadbare – a torrent of simple sentences that do nothing to build suspense or emotion. Have an excerpt for one of the more gripping scenes:

A few seconds later the door to the cage squealed closed and the lock rattled again. Footsteps retreated. Lights turned off. A door closed.

Darkness again.

I started breathing. I looked down at the phone in my hand and then up at the network router. The rows of green lights went dark. A single red light began blinking on the left side of the box.

“Sherloc?” My mouth was dry and my voice sounded shakier than I liked.

His voice was reassuring in the darkness. “I have changed the security protocols and rebooted the routers. We can now access any network from this building without being tracked.”

I pulled the cable out of the router and stepped off the bucket. I walked as quickly as I could back between the dark storage cases. Enough secrets for tonight.

The elevator ride back to Floor 17 was silent. Sherloc was probably inside some network somewhere.

It’s just not doing it for me. I want my heart to pound with worry the whole time John’s in danger! Instead, the action is over within a few sentences and John comes across as only faintly discomforted.

With more attention to detail and evocative prose, this bland novella could easily turn into a thrilling YA novel. The substance is there – it just needs a little extra oomph.